Not bad.. In fact I liked it!
It looks good, the drawings are nice, but it would be better if you had some transitioning animation, instead of just switching scenes and having them in different locations. If you can make smooth animated transitions, maybe even fbf(frame by frame) transitions, this could be front page material (if you got some more 'plot' in the search for a plot =P) overall, keep up the good work... remeber, hard work pays off =D